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Wednesday 16 September 2015

Presuasive writing

Today I have chosen this work of mine to post because I wanted everyone to know why breakfast is important.What I had to do was to write a persuasive text about why people should have breakfast.What I enjoyed was having to gather all my ideas and making it into a persuaive text.What I found challenging was when I had to speak into the voice typer because everytime i'd talk it would type up somethging different.How I overcame the challenge was just speak slowly,start again and never gave up.Thank you and hope you enjoy my persuasive writing.

 My name is Franzene and I am persuading to say why people should have breakfast every morning. The reason why is because if you don't have it in the morning you might get hungry at school,you won’t get enough energy and you could lose your memory. Energy is one of the most important reasons why you should have breakfast. Energy helps you play,function and think. Breakfast is full of carbohydrates which give you energy. Mood is another reason why you should have breakfast because when you get to school after eating breakfast you will feel happy and you will enjoy your day.If you don’t have breakfast you might go to school angry,mad and might not enjoy your day. If you don’t have breakfast you won’t believe this but you could have memory loss and you might not be able to remember things that you were suppose to remember or anything.You also won’t be able to concentrate on school work properly. Those are my different reasons why you should have breakfast every morning of the week. You might think to eat breakfast,just to lose weight or your lazy but really you're just not helping yourself. Also there is breakfast club at school which is on Monday to Thursday. So feel free to walk along there if you don’t have breakfast at home or still not full.

1 comment:

  1. LOVELY REASONS!I think that these are amazing reasons especially the one where we have to eat breakfast so we can work properly.What I think you need to work on is well......nothing really but maybe space your writing and paragraphs a little bit.
    Thanks form Caroline

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